Hi, I've got a few minor typos/corrections to p2psip-base-15 which I have been meaning to send. I've checked the diffs and they all still apply to -18 though.
Section 3.3, second diagram The third arrow (from X to Z) is annotated as Dest=Z, X1 I think it should be marked 'Via X1, Dest=Z' instead, to make it consistent with the rules in 5.1.2. Section 5.3.1, first bullet of first bulleted list "It familiar" should be "It is familiar" Section 5.3.3, description of 'critical' "does not understand the message" should be "does not understand the extension" Section 5.3.3.1, first sentence "A peer" should be "A node" Section 5.3.4, item 2 "a Node-ID which is as close to or closer to the target" Isn't the notion of closeness topology-dependent, and so should be moved to the Chord section? A statement here about applying any topology-specific plausibility checking would then tie it in. Section 9.7.4.3, first paragraph The phrase "high odds" seems confusing here. Either "high probability" or "low odds" would seem closer in meaning to what I think this section is trying to say. Regards, Michael _______________________________________________ P2PSIP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip
