Hi, Marc, Thank you for the review. I will submit a new revision after the IETF submission reopen.
BR, Ning Zong -----Original Message----- From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Marc Petit-Huguenin Sent: Monday, November 07, 2011 12:41 AM To: P2PSIP Mailing List Subject: [P2PSIP] Review of draft-ietf-p2psip-ddr-00 -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 1. Section 6.2.2: second paragraph The new option is defined as EXTENSIVE_ROUTING_MODE_TYPE here and in other sections, but is define as extensive_routing_mode in the IANA registry in section 9.1. 2. Section 6.2.2, structure definition The enum does not follow the usual syntax: enum { (0), DDR(1), RPR(2), (255) } RouteMode; OverlayLink should be OverlayLinkType. In the next paragraph, Transport should be OverlayLinkType. - -- Marc Petit-Huguenin Personal email: [email protected] Professional email: [email protected] Blog: http://blog.marc.petit-huguenin.org -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.11 (GNU/Linux) iEYEARECAAYFAk62uH8ACgkQ9RoMZyVa61eugACgiMQucyky9UbXc4RWJbyf9tLR /ssAoKjYg/9a5WftuowTMImI/qF615KQ =61db -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- _______________________________________________ P2PSIP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip _______________________________________________ P2PSIP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip
