Thanks, Marc I will revise both drafts based on your comments.
-Ning > -----Original Message----- > From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of > Marc Petit-Huguenin > Sent: Monday, September 03, 2012 1:58 AM > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Re: [P2PSIP] WGLC for draft-ietf-p2psip-drr-02 > > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- > Hash: SHA256 > > I carefully read this I-D and I think it is ready to be submitted to the IESG. > > My only comment would be that, although the distinction between node, peer > and > client is clearly explained in section 2, their usage in the subsequent > sections is less rigorous. For example section 6 uses "peer" where it should > probably use node instead. > > > Nits > - ---- > > - - Section 1.1: > > s/intermediary peers ./intermediary peers./ > > - - Section 6.2: > > s/state- keeping/state-keeping/ > > - - Section 6.2.1: > > s/flag : 0x8/flag : 0x08/ > > s/VIA list/via_list/ > > - - Section 6.2.2; > > s/section 5.3.2.3/section 6.3.2.3/ > > s/Destination destination<1..2^8-1>;/Destination destinations<1..2^8-1>;/ > > s/section 5.5.1.1/section 6.5.1.1/ > > s/section 5.3.2.2/section 6.3.2.2/ > > s/section 5.3.1.1/section 6.3.1.1/ > > s/node's node-id./node's Node-ID./ > > (node-id used at other places in the i_D) > > - - Section 6.3.1: > > s/defined as type peer/defined as type node/ > > - - Section 6.4.2: > > s/trying to response/trying to respond/ > > - - Section 7.1: > > s/a STUN usage [I-D.ietf-behave-nat-behavior-discovery]/a STUN usage > [RFC5780]/ > > UPnp-IGD and NAT-PMP are missing references. > > - - Section 9.1: Type: 0x2 > > Should be formatted as section 14.12 in -base. > > > On 08/06/2012 02:36 PM, Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano wrote: > > Hi, > > > > Hereby we are issuing a WGLC for draft-ietf-p2psip-drr-02. > > > > The WGLC will be open till the 3rd of September to give enough time for > > people to review considering the summer break. We kindly ask the WG to > > review the document and provide comments. > > > > If you have no comments and think the document is ready to be submitted to > > IESG, please do send a note stating that to the WG ML. > > > > Additional information about the document is below: > > > > Title : An extension to RELOAD to support Direct Response > > Routing Author(s) : Ning Zong Xingfeng Jiang Roni Even Yunfei Zhang > > Filename : draft-ietf-p2psip-drr-02.txt Pages : 18 Date > > : 2012-05-29 > > > > This document proposes an optional extension to RELOAD to support direct > > response routing mode. RELOAD recommends symmetric recursive routing > for > > routing messages. The new optional extension provides a shorter route for > > responses reducing the overhead on intermediary peers and describes the > > potential cases where this extension can be used. > > > > > > A URL for this Internet-Draft is: > > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-p2psip-drr-02.txt > > > > The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-p2psip-drr/ > > > > > > - -- > Marc Petit-Huguenin > Email: [email protected] > Blog: http://blog.marc.petit-huguenin.org > Profile: http://www.linkedin.com/in/petithug > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- > Version: GnuPG v1.4.12 (GNU/Linux) > > iQIcBAEBCAAGBQJQQ54cAAoJECnERZXWan7EAJ8QALis/HDuHw3DGcXeXBSH1 > o1M > 32q0l48oguxME/pQeMUcU6cuwuDMzU8277irhC4zUluvcZp07XJhTNp/T/heXSe > 0 > 2vWe5O+hg+D219y3dr78Zq6+MKE/NiBiKJBIjM8jHGmQAjs++BCePhLCXBV54oe > 4 > oCNVj46LSXQhud87HIOBDvb1Lfrx0N2TAl3EWLJ4yWSxaImTjrAhXfCHH2volz0Z > lRcbSWktWUDSXna2dp4gdsArtE2oAI1Swcebknj5Epo+JoC6Okbl0j094I8o3ogr > j2/p4N1H4NrZZlsn4hxJKeTBDa8/XQMiojCa/D9uro7uDgcxsROkrkxdagCxdQfD > bAr35lfPLSalrWf8jcomhwHhFUTPrFPW/ShnODG9sfeUAyBGZOONikwcv+FS7VSL > XLy8B4MViFQmBMBC+RB0fUlKb2P06p919l5GsfMyOuPHFPRNw1pXmOj2FVB1I > C6f > fl65mM7u4xT0BrutLLUqBU9+oV7XzEOBGkAnpJsoZNr0/a/2Dbw7rKP+AoQTb3R > s > 9PDHibjtJOnPlsnhGWyXu7adhkKeMQ88IsaTawyMkcRxUEBRdKFzdxd6iam9VDt > 0 > IUvCTSNKcVLxJIdxh02yfsiC3sn1qoYGnwSXCYqWL9cnJKnPqzuAOCHnPUrLCvtV > INYCsR45ONXPvFUQ65Tl > =ViOI > -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- > _______________________________________________ > P2PSIP mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip _______________________________________________ P2PSIP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip
