Marc,

Thanks for the revision to section 10.5 bullet 2 and section 11.4.
However, just notice two places related to this that need the following
changes to match bullet 2:

Section 11.4 paragraph 2:
  Old: "sends an Attach request over this connection with the
destination Resource-ID set to the joining node's Node-ID."
  New: "sends an Attach request over this connection with the
destination Resource-ID set to the joining node's Node-ID plus 1."

Section 12 paragraph 2:
  Old: "JN then sends an Attach through that peer to a Resource-ID of
itself (JN)."
  New: "JN then sends an Attach through that peer to a Resource-ID of
its Node-ID plus 1 (JN+1)."

Section 12 diagram after paragraph 2:
  Old: "AttachReq Dest=JN"    2 occurrences
  New: "AttachReq Dest=JN+1"  2 replacements

Thanks

--Michael

> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: [P2PSIP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-p2psip-base-25.txt
> From: [email protected]
> Date: Wed, February 20, 2013 5:37 pm
> To: [email protected]
> Cc: [email protected]
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Peer-to-Peer Session Initiation Protocol 
> Working Group of the IETF.
> 
>       Title           : REsource LOcation And Discovery (RELOAD) Base Protocol
>       Author(s)       : Cullen Jennings
>                           Bruce B. Lowekamp
>                           Eric Rescorla
>                           Salman A. Baset
>                           Henning Schulzrinne
>       Filename        : draft-ietf-p2psip-base-25.txt
>       Pages           : 174
>       Date            : 2013-02-20
> 
> Abstract:
>    This specification defines REsource LOcation And Discovery (RELOAD),
>    a peer-to-peer (P2P) signaling protocol for use on the Internet.  A
>    P2P signaling protocol provides its clients with an abstract storage
>    and messaging service between a set of cooperating peers that form
>    the overlay network.  RELOAD is designed to support a P2P Session
>    Initiation Protocol (P2PSIP) network, but can be utilized by other
>    applications with similar requirements by defining new usages that
>    specify the kinds of data that needs to be stored for a particular
>    application.  RELOAD defines a security model based on a certificate
>    enrollment service that provides unique identities.  NAT traversal is
>    a fundamental service of the protocol.  RELOAD also allows access
>    from "client" nodes that do not need to route traffic or store data
>    for others.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-p2psip-base
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-p2psip-base-25
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-p2psip-base-25
> 
> 
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