Hi Jouni, Thanks. I'll take a quick look and request the publication of the document to the IESG.
Thanks, Carlos On Mon, 2013-08-05 at 17:27 +0000, Jouni Mäenpää wrote: > Hi, > > Thanks for the comments! They have now been addressed in the revision -09 of > the draft. > > Regards, > Jouni > > -----Original Message----- > From: Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: 29. heinäkuuta 2013 16:58 > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected] > Subject: Review of draft-ietf-p2psip-service-discovery-08 > > Hi, > > I've performed a Document Shepherd review of > draft-ietf-p2psip-service-discovery-08. > > I think the document is in very good shape and I'll be requesting the > publication of the document later this week. I have some very minor comments > that maybe can be addressed by the authors in the next revision of the > document, together with any other comments you might get during the next > steps in the publication process: > > - Page 4. Section 2 (Terminology). There is a reference to > draft-ietf-p2psip-concepts. We'll discuss in this meeting (and follow up on > the ML later) what to do with this document. Depending on the decision, you > might need to modify/remove this part and add some other changes. > > - Page 4. Section 2 (Terminology). I think adding some text introducing the > listed terms would not harm. > > - Sections 10.2 and 10.3. I guess RFC-AAAA refers to the number assigned to > the document when finally published, right? If so, adding a note to the > RFC-Editor would not harm. Please, also fix table in Section 10.3 (now it > expands over two different pages). > > - Page 3: "it scales linearly in the number of nodes" --> I think it should > be "it scales linearly in the number of nodes". > > Thanks, > > Carlos > _______________________________________________ P2PSIP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip
