https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1051920



--- Comment #3 from Jamie Nguyen <[email protected]> ---
Additional issues:

In the %summary "add-on" is the spelling used, while in the description it is
"addon". I would go for the hyphenated spelling.

Also, the sentence is missing an "an" and doesn't need a comma:
"This is add-on to udisks, that enabled usage of LVM."
"This is an add-on to udisks that enables usage of LVM."

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