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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=784950 --- Comment #21 from nucleo <[email protected]> 2012-02-09 09:47:50 EST --- (In reply to comment #19) > One thing that leaps out immediately, IMO: > > > Summary: Telepathy contact plasmoid > > > > %description > > %{summary}. > > Please really avoid making the description a copy of the summary, which > usually > doesn't build a full sentence. The description is supposed to expand on the > summary. > > [...] > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Packaging/Guidelines#summary > > | The summary should be a short and concise description of the package. > | The description expands upon this. > > [...] > > With a comprehendible description (and summary) you also want to raise > interest > among users, who browse through package search results. A good description > would even sum up what "Telepathy" is. > > Insiders may consider the three words in the summary concise, but even with > the > insider knowledge what "Telepathy" is and what a "plasmoid" is, one wonders > what this package does? What does it do related to Telepathy contacts? Display > them or more? What is its primary feature? The description should tell. > > Some other distributions mention "KDE" in the summary and avoid using the > special term "plasmoid". I think that's smarter: > > Telepathy contact applet for KDE > KDE Telepathy contact applet > Plasma applet for displaying contacts > > e.g. > KDE applet to handle Telepathy contacts > > and the description could mention Plasma, if that is considered essential. Great, finally error in package found! -- Configure bugmail: https://bugzilla.redhat.com/userprefs.cgi?tab=email ------- You are receiving this mail because: ------- You are on the CC list for the bug. _______________________________________________ package-review mailing list [email protected] https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/package-review
