On Sun, Aug 24, 2008 at 4:45 PM, Allan McRae <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Slight changes here. I don't like "instances of" as that implies there can > be multiple occurrences of each. Also a tidy up of the grammar at the end. > I would prefer not to use "If present" twice as it does not read well, but > can not think of a better way at this time of night... > > If present, %u will be replaced with the download URL. Otherwise, the > download URL will be placed on the end of the command. If present, %o will > be replaced with the local filename, plus a ".part" extension, which allows > makepkg to handle resuming file downloads. >
Thanks, I applied your corrections. I agree that "if present" twice is not so smooth but well... Not a big deal. _______________________________________________ pacman-dev mailing list [email protected] http://archlinux.org/mailman/listinfo/pacman-dev
