Scott, Raj

Thank you for all your hard work on the requirements drafts. I've reviewed 
draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-05.txt and it appears to cover all 
the UK and Ofcom requirements as we currently understand them. I believe that 
there will be a public url from next week for the reference for [Ofcom 
Requirements], and I'll let you know as soon as this is made available.

I have a suggestion regarding Figure 8, for clarity. According to the text, 
this scenario is not dependent on the air interface being TDD, so it should be 
labelled as "WS AirIF" (for consistency with subsequent figures) instead of 
"TDD Air Interface". I then suggest that the label is moved to be next to or 
across the dotted line between the right hand master device and the slave 
device that was added recently under editing. At the moment it could be 
interpreted that the slave is wired to the master.

Finally I have found just two typos:

In 6.2 O.2, second sentence: "... have the capability determine its 
location..." is missing "to"
In 6.2 O.9, "frequency" is misspelt.

Regards

Andy

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Subject: Re: [paws] I-D Action: 
draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-05.txt

Hello All,

This version 05 contains updates from the editors to address the comments 
posted to the reflector during 2nd WGLC. We hope this fulfills the work group's 
needs & desires, and look forward to continued progress in PAWS.

Kind Regards,
Scott & Raj



On 6/21/12 11:42 AM, "ext [email protected]"
<[email protected]> wrote:

>
>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
>directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Protocol to Access WS database 
>Working Group of the IETF.
>
>    Title           : Protocol to Access White Space database: PS, use
>cases and rqmts
>    Author(s)       : Scott Probasco
>                          Basavaraj Patil
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-05.txt
>    Pages           : 42
>    Date            : 2012-06-21
>
>Abstract:
>   Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use
>   but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are
>   defined as "white space".  The concept of allowing additional
>   transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a
>   technique to "unlock" existing spectrum for new use.  An obvious
>   requirement is that these additional transmissions do not interfere
>   with the assigned use of the spectrum.  One approach to using the
>   white space spectrum at a given time and location is to verify with a
>   database for available channels.
>
>   This document describes a number of possible use cases of white space
>   spectrum and technology as well as a set of requirements for the
>   database query protocol.  The concept of TV white spaces is described
>   including the problems that need to be addressed to enable white
>   space spectrum for additional uses without causing interference to
>   currently assigned use.  Use of white space is enabled by querying a
>   database which stores information about the channel availability at
>   any given location and time.
>
>
>The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-
>rqm
>ts
>
>There's also a htmlized version available at:
>http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-
>05
>
>A diff from previous version is available at:
>http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecase
>s-r
>qmts-05
>
>
>Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>
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