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Document: draft-ietf-pce-global-concurrent-optimization-10
Reviewer: David L. Black
Review Date: April 3, 2009
IESG Telechat date: April 9, 2009
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.
Comments:
The -10 draft addresses all of the points noted in the
Gen-ART review of the -08 version. Unfortunately,
idnits 2.11.08 found a few things to complain about:
** You're using the IETF Trust Provisions Section 6.b License Notice
from
10 Nov 2008 rather than the newer Notice from 12 Feb 2009, which is
required now. (See http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/)
** There are 3 instances of too long lines in the document, the
longest one
being 2 characters in excess of 72.
== The document seems to lack a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, but
was
first submitted before 10 November 2008. Should you add the
disclaimer?
(See the Legal Provisions document at
http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info for more information.).
== Missing Reference: 'PCEP' is mentioned on line 565, but not defined
The RFC Editor can take care of the "too long lines" item,
but the other three items need attention.
Thanks,
--David
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