The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5623, "Framework for PCE-Based Inter-Layer MPLS and GMPLS Traffic Engineering".
-------------------------------------- You may review the report below and at: http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5623&eid=1897 -------------------------------------- Type: Editorial Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <[email protected]> Section: 4.1, Original Text ------------- a) Section 4.1, 2nd paragraph (bottom of page 10): A VNT Manager (VNTM) is defined as a functional element that manages and controls the VNT. The PCE and VNT Manager are distinct | functional elements that may or may not be collocated. ^^ b) Section 4.2.4, trailing Note below Table 1 (on page 22): * Note that, in case of NSM-VNTM cooperation (separate flavor) and single PCE inter-layer path computation, the PCE function used by | NMS and VNTM may be collocated, but it will operate on separate TEDs. ^^ Corrected Text -------------- a) A VNT Manager (VNTM) is defined as a functional element that manages and controls the VNT. The PCE and VNT Manager are distinct | functional elements that may or may not be co-located. b) * Note that, in case of NSM-VNTM cooperation (separate flavor) and single PCE inter-layer path computation, the PCE function used by | NMS and VNTM may be co-located, but it will operate on separate TEDs. Notes ----- Rationale: "collocated" and "co-located" (or "colocated") have very different semantics! The latter seems to be the appropriate choice: two logical entites (or subsystems) are located within the same system. The former means "arranged/placed/sorted *somehow*, in the proper way", without emphasis on neighborship or common enclosement. Instructions: ------------- This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG) can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. -------------------------------------- RFC5623 (draft-ietf-pce-inter-layer-frwk-10) -------------------------------------- Title : Framework for PCE-Based Inter-Layer MPLS and GMPLS Traffic Engineering Publication Date : September 2009 Author(s) : E. Oki, T. Takeda, JL. Le Roux, A. Farrel Category : INFORMATIONAL Source : Path Computation Element Area : Routing Stream : IETF Verifying Party : IESG _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
