I have just completed a second shepherd review of this document. For reference, my first review can be found at the link below. https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/pce/kAw8SJX3uv5_gsW7Qa03Td0pBU4
I would like to pass a massive vote of thanks to the authors for reacting brilliantly to my previous review and turning this document around. It is now at a much higher quality level and is much easier to read. I found a small number of typos below - feel free to hold these until the next revision.. Well done. I will start the shepherd write-up. Best regards Jon S1.2 s/ When a path has required/ When a path is required/ S3.1 s/a single point failure/a single point of failure/ S6.1.1 s/ must be include or exclude/ must be included or excluded/ s/ ASes are public entity as well as their interconnection/ ASes and their interconnections are public entities/ S7.1 s/ its TED is by participating/ its TED by participating/
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