Hi Tal, Thanks for your review.
I have made an update handling the nits. A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-stateful-hpce-11 Thanks! Dhruv On Sun, Jul 7, 2019 at 1:05 PM Tal Mizrahi <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hello, > > I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The > Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as > they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special > request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing > ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see > http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir > > Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it > would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last > Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion > or by updating the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-hpce > Reviewer: Tal Mizrahi > Review Date: July, 2019 > Intended Status: Informational > > Summary: > No issues found. This document is ready for publication. > > Nits: > -Section 1.1. is the only subsection of Section 1. Please consider adding a > subsection "Background" that will consist of the text before the current 1.1. > -"(previously computed paths" - there is no matching ")" > -Section 6.3 - please consider if this should be moved to the security > considerations section, or add a reference from the security considerations > section to this one. > > Best regards, > Tal. _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
