Hi, That change looks good to me.
Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 1424 Pro Shop Court, Davenport, FL 33896 USA [email protected] On Tue, Sep 3, 2019 at 3:00 AM Dhruv Dhody <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Donald, > > Thanks for your review. > > On Thu, Aug 29, 2019 at 8:21 PM Donald Eastlake <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > I have reviewed this document as part of the Security Directorate's > ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. > Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any > other last call comments. > > > > The summary of the review is Almost Ready. > > > > This document specifies an extension to the stateful Path Computation > Element Communication Protocol to associate two or more Label Switched > Paths for the purpose of setting up path protection. > > > > This is not at all my area of expertise. The Security Considerations > section primarily refers to the Security Considerations in existing RFCs > and one draft, draft-ietf-pce-association-group (which is already in the > RFC Editor queue). I think these references are pretty thorough and provide > good security coverage and advice with one possible exception. Given that > this document specifies a new facility, it seems likely that a few narrow > sentences would be in order about the damage an adversary could cause by > specifically monkeying with that new facility. > > > > I see that authors have posted a new revision (-10) that has this sentence > - > > Adding a spurious protection LSP > to the Path Protection Association group could give false sense of > network reliability, which leads to issues when the working LSP is > down and the protection LSP fails as well. > > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pce-stateful-path-protection-10#section-7 > > Does this work for you? > > Thanks! > Dhruv > > > > Tiny nits: > > In abstract and other places when referring to what this standards track > draft does: "describes" -> "specifies" or "defines" > > Draft references draft-ietf-pce-association-diversity-08 when latest > version is -09 > > > > Thanks, > > Donald > > =============================== > > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > > 1424 Pro Shop Court, Davenport, FL 33896 USA > > [email protected] >
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