Thanks Andrew for reviewing the updates and also finding an omission.

We have posted the updated draft to address your suggestion.

URL:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path-19.txt
Diff:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path-19

Thank you again,
Rakesh (for authors)



On Mon, Dec 1, 2025 at 12:51 PM Andrew Stone (Nokia) <[email protected]>
wrote:

> Sorry that should say “figure 2b” —> not 3b.
>
> *From: *Andrew Stone (Nokia) <[email protected]>
> *Date: *Monday, December 1, 2025 at 12:49 PM
> *To: *Samuel Sidor (ssidor) <[email protected]>, Rakesh Gandhi <
> [email protected]>
> *Cc: *Dhruv Dhody <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>,
> [email protected] <
> [email protected]>
> *Subject: *Re: [Pce] Re: WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path-16
>
> Hi Rakesh,
>
> Thanks for the updates and clarifications below and in the -18 revision,
> looks good to me.
>
> Only one thing remaining:  I think some updates are needed to Section 3.2
> to reflect the changes.
>
> Section 3.2 Step 2 indicates Stateful pce "*MUST update*"  via a "*PcInitiate
> message*" (emphasis mine) or PcUpd message. For PCC-Initiated, since this
> is carried  in the reverse path ERO now, there's no interaction here with
> PCInitiate message therefore its use can be just omitted. Extending on
> this, the example in figure 3b displays PCInitiate but in this situation it
> would just be a PcUpd of PLSPID 100 to inform R2, and PLSPID 200 to inform
> R1.  Lastly -> note that the PcUpdate MUST CONTAIN both the forward and
> reverse EROs (all or nothing) in the update.
>
> Thanks!
> Andrew
>
>
> *From: *Samuel Sidor (ssidor) <[email protected]>
> *Date: *Friday, November 28, 2025 at 3:41 AM
> *To: *Rakesh Gandhi <[email protected]>, Andrew Stone (Nokia) <
> [email protected]>
> *Cc: *Dhruv Dhody <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>,
> [email protected] <
> [email protected]>
> *Subject: *Re: [Pce] Re: WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path-16
>
>
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>
> Thanks a lot, Rakesh.
>
> Updated version looks fine to me (I support WGLC).
>
> Regards,
> Samuel
>
> *From: *Rakesh Gandhi <[email protected]>
> *Date: *Friday, 28 November 2025 at 01:58
> *To: *Andrew Stone (Nokia) <[email protected]>, Samuel Sidor
> (ssidor) <[email protected]>
> *Cc: *Dhruv Dhody <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>,
> [email protected] <
> [email protected]>
> *Subject: *Re: [Pce] Re: WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path-16
>
> Hi Andrew, Samuel, WG,
>
> Attaching the further updated draft that uses Reverse ERO instead of
> Reverse LSP for an associated bidir SR path.
>
> Hope this addresses your suggestions.
>
> Please advise your review comments on these updates.
>
> Thanks,
> Rakesh (for authors)
>
>
>
> On Mon, Nov 24, 2025 at 5:28 PM Rakesh Gandhi <[email protected]>
> wrote:
>
> Thank you Andrew for the detailed review and the suggestions.
>
> Please see replies inline with <RG>..
>
> On Tue, Nov 18, 2025 at 2:06 PM Andrew Stone (Nokia) <andrew.stone=
> [email protected]> wrote:
>
> Hi authors, PCE WG.
>
> The draft appears to be well structured, and pretty clear in its
> instructions. Some comments/feedback:
>
>
>    - I’m still a bit unclear on the use case why a PCC needs to know
>    "status and all other path related information”. Knowing the ERO
>    information is clearer to me, but knowing all state info for the LSP is a
>    bit unclear.  Perhaps it’s just because I didn’t dive deeper into the
>    related documents…
>
>
> <RG> You are right, PCC doesn't need all the information about the reverse
> LSP, except the ERO.
> <RG> I think Samuel also commented along the same line.
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/pce/ylEPl6MC9XfqBDokzss0fv8rjyc/
>
> <RG> Do you agree that it could just use the reverse ERO from the
> multi-path draft?
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-pce-multipath-16.txt
>
>
>
>
>
>    - The document points to a lot of other RFC details, while good, means
>    jumping and scanning. Would be useful if some of the references pointed to
>    specific sections of detailed relevancy - specifically to details found in
>    RFC9059 since it’s tightly related.
>
>
> <RG> Acking.
>
>
>
>    -
>    - Section 3.1 - Says a SR path must not be part of more than one
>    'Double-Sided Bidirectional with Reverse LSP Association'. If this happens
>    (misconfig), what should the resulting action be? IMO simply stating the
>    PCE should not send down reverse path information to any PCC is likely
>    sufficient, but it would be worth describing an expected outcome.
>
>
> <RG> How about following?
>
>    *  An SR Path (forward or reverse) MUST NOT be part of more than one
>       'Double-Sided Bidirectional with Reverse LSP Association'.  A PCE,
>       upon detecting this condition, MUST NOT send the reverse SR Path
>       to ingress node PCC.
>
>
>
>    -
>    - Section 4.2 - to confirm my understanding:  for PCC-initiated
>    forward LSP config, the LSP must be pre-configured on PCC with the
>    Double-Sided Bidirectional with Reverse LSP Association values.
>
>
> <RG> Right.
>
>
>
>    - When PCE notifies the PCC about the reverse path info, it then
>    re-uses these same association values, this is what will allow the PCC (and
>    another PCE) to correlate which is the "information-only" LSP info?
>
>
> <RG> Right.
>
>
>
>
>    -  i.e so the original PCC-init config is not blank and is
>    pre-established with an association identifier? If so, sounds good.
>
>
> <RG> I am not 100% clear on "the original PCC-init config is not blank"
> part. Just wanted to make sure I am not missing anything.
>
>
>
>
>    -
>    - Section 3.1.1 - it says it "uses" the Bidirectional LSP Association
>    group TLV. Should this be changed to MUST INCLUDE for the reverse path?
>    since RFC9059 indicates the TLV is optional and when omitted means the path
>    is a forward LSP and not co-routed? in other words, when PCE uses PCE-INIT
>    to inform a PCC about the reverse path, it MUST carry the Bidirectional LSP
>    Association group TLV.
>
>
> <RG> How about following?
>
> 3.1.1.  Bidirectional LSP Association Group TLV
>
>    When a PCE informs ingress node PCC about the reverse SR Path using
>    the 'Double-Sided Bidirectional with Reverse LSP Association', it
>    MUST include the 'Bidirectional LSP Association Group TLV' to
>    indicate the reverse direction and the co-routed path properties as
>    defined in Section 4.2 of [RFC9059].  All fields and processing rules
>    for this association group are followed as per Section 4 of
>    [RFC9059].
>
>
>
>
>
> Nit:
>
>
>    - Abstract last sentence says "can also" but I'm not sure what "also"
>    references here. Perhaps simply:  The mechanisms defined in this document
>    are applicable to both stateless and stateful PCEs for PCE-initiated and
>    PCC-initiated LSPs.
>
>
> <RG> Fixed.
>
> Thanks,
> Rakesh (for authors)
>
>
>
>
>
> Thanks!
> Andrew
>
> *From: *Dhruv Dhody <[email protected]>
> *Date: *Sunday, November 9, 2025 at 1:53 AM
> *To: *[email protected] <[email protected]>
> *Cc: *[email protected] <
> [email protected]>
> *Subject: *[Pce] WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path-16
>
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> Hi WG,
>
> This email marks the start of the working group last call
> for draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path -
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path/
>
> Please indicate your support or concern for this draft. If you are opposed
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> you support it, please indicate that you have read the latest version and
> it is ready for publication in your opinion. As always, review comments and
> nits are most welcome.
>
> The WG LC will end on Monday 24th Nov 2025.
>
> *A general reminder to the WG to be more vocal during the
> last-call/adoption.*
>
> Thanks,
> Dhruv & Julien
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