Thanks Med for the review and confirmation.

FYI, We have posted the revised version:

HTMLized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path
Diff:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path-22

thanks,
Rakesh


On Wed, Feb 25, 2026 at 3:44 AM <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hi Rakesh, all,
>
>
>
> I also saw the replies from Ketan and Dhruv. I had the discussion I wanted
> to have for the first point and I consider that point closed. Thanks.
>
>
>
> Thank you Rakesh for the follow-up and changes below. I also checked the
> diff. All looks good to me.
>
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Med
>
>
>
> *De :* Rakesh Gandhi <[email protected]>
> *Envoyé :* mardi 24 février 2026 23:29
> *À :* BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <[email protected]>
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> draft-ietf-pce-sr-bidir-path-21: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
>
>
>
>
>
> Thank you Med for the detailed review of the document and the suggestions.
>
>
>
> Attaching the diff file and text file updated to address the comments.
>
>
>
> Please see replies inline with <RG>...
>
>
>
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> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> DISCUSS:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> Hi Cheng, Mach, Weiqiang, Rakesh, and Quan,
>
> Thank you for the effort put into this specification. The theory of
> operation
> is well described and key events are identified/logged.
>
> Thanks to Carlos Pignataro for the OPSDIR review. Thanks to the authors for
> engaging and addressing the points raised by Carlos. Appreciated.
>
> Please find below some few DISCUSSion points:
>
> # Multipath dependency
>
> CURRENT:
>    This extension also utilizes the
>    procedure defined in [I-D.ietf-pce-multipath] to carry the multiple
>    EROs and the associated reverse path EROs for an SR LSP.
>
> As there is a dependency on that one, are we confident that one is stable
> enough to progress this one?
>
> I appreciate that the writeup says:
>
>    “This I-D uses a PCEP Object/TLV defined in the normatively referenced
> I-D
>    but
>     makes no changes to it.”
>
> but the question is also the other way around: is there any change in
> I-D.ietf-pce-multipath that would impact this spec?
>
> IMO, maybe wait I-D.ietf-pce-multipath to be approved before sending both
> documents to the RFC Editor? This is more convenient rather than pulling
> the
> doc from the RFC Editor queue.
>
>
>
> <RG> This draft uses reverse ERO object (ERO is a well-known PCEP object)
> and N/L/R flags for the attribute from the ietf-pce-multi-path draft, which
> are quite isolated and unlikely to go through a churn in that draft.
>
>
>
>
>
>
> # Too generic
>
> CURRENT:
>    The PCEP YANG module [RFC9826] defines a data model for LSP
>    associations.  However, it does not include information for
>    associated bidirectional SR LSPs.
>
> ACK.
>
> The question is: Are there key parameters that would be needed for the
> feature
> defined in this doc. For example, would the following be needed:
>
> * Indicate whether bidir paths are supported by a node?
>
> * Control activate/deactivation of bidir association?
>
> * Counters of active bidir paths?
>
> * Counters of failed bidir paths?
>
>
>
> <RG> Added these.
>
>
>
>
>
>
> # Liveness detection
>
> CURRENT:
>    Mechanisms defined in this document do not imply any new liveness
>    detection and monitoring requirements.
>
> I’m afraid some elaboration is needed here.
>
> The intro claimed that some apps requires both direction, monitoring
> should be
> covering both directions in order to assess the serviceability.
>
> We need to say at least so (and require that both directions are
> correlated at
> the manager level).
>
>
>
> <RG> Added as follows.
>
>
>
> 8.3.  Liveness Detection and Monitoring
>
>    Mechanisms defined in this document do not imply any new liveness
>    detection and monitoring requirements as they are performed
>    independently on both sides of a bidirectional SR LSP, using the
>    forward and reverse LSP paths of the bidirectional SR LSP.  However,
>    the monitoring on both sides of a bidirectional SR LSP needs to be
>    correlated at the management level to ensure that the bidirectional
>    service carried by the bidirectional SR LSP is operational.
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> # Stateless
>
> The abstract says:
>
>    The mechanisms defined in this document are
>    applicable to both stateless and stateful PCEs for PCE-initiated and
>    PCC-initiated LSPs
>
> I’m not sure where stateless is discussed in the doc.
>
> If so, can we make that explicit for readers? I’m not asking to change the
> abstract but to have that in the introduction, for example.
>
>
>
> <RG> Added in the Introduction section at a couple of places.
>
>
>
>
> # Mobile case
>
> CURRENT:
>    There are some applications that require bidirectional paths in SR
>    networks, for example, such as in mobile backhaul transport networks.
>
>
> ## Great that you provided an example.
>
> ## As readers may not be familiar with specifics of that case: I wonder
> whether
> you can include a pointer where one can further dig into this specific
> case.
>
>
>
> <RG> We couldn't find any related reference. Removed this text as it was
> not part of the spec.
>
>
>
>
> # (Fully) Symmetric paths
>
> I wonder whether we can clarify early in the doc that bidir is not
> necessarily
> about having fully symmetric paths.
>
>
>
> <RG> Added some text related to co-routed and non-co-routed paths in
> Introduction.
>
>
>
>
> # Overview
>
> Can we say that the description assumes that no errors are encountered and
> all
> operations are successful.
>
>
>
> <RG> Added.
>
>
>
>
> # Section 8
>
> I know the context of that naming in PCE, but the considerations are beyond
> management. Also, in order to be consistent with latest discussion in OPS,
> I
> suggest the following change:
>
> OLD: 8.  Manageability Considerations
>
> NEW: 8.  Operational Considerations
>
>
>
> <RG> Updated.
>
>
>
>
> # nits
>
>
>
> <RG> Fixed all nits below.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Rakesh
>
>
>
>
>
>
> ## paradigm
>
> Source routing was there before SR. Can we please consider this change
> through
> the doc:
>
> OLD: source routing paradigm
>
> NEW: source routing
>
> ## There isn’t only no one network
>
> Please consider this change in the abstract
>
> OLD:  in each direction in the network)
>
> NEW: OLD:  in each direction in a network)
>
> ## Expand PCC in the introduction
>
> ## Terminology
>
> OLD: Protocol (PCEP), PCEP Peer, PCEP speaker.
>
> NEW: OLD: Protocol (PCEP), PCEP Peer, and PCEP speaker.
>
> ## Section 4
>
> OLD: the the procedures defined in [RFC9059]
>
> NEW: the procedures defined in [RFC9059]
>
> ## Section 5.2
>
> OLD: The PST
>
> NEW: The PCEP Path Setup Type (PST)
>
> ## Section 8.6: These are not new anymore
>
> OLD: New tools such
>
> NEW: Tools such
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
>
>
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