They are nice shots Paul, but she doesn't fit the setting. To be believable,
she needs more makeup (eye shadow, liner, rouge, lipstick, the whole bit).
she needs a tattoo on at least one shoulder, on her belly, and on her ankle,
and she needs to have a cigarette in her hand or mouth in every picture.
Speaking of belly, the waistline is too high, not enough gap between the top
and the jeans.  And she should have a few lines around her eyes. She looks
too content; nobody lives in a trailer park without at least a few worry
lines... What you have here is someone from a wealthy suburb, a Gap and
Abercrombie customer, who is playacting at living in a trailer park but
doesn't know how to drink or smoke or even how to dress trashy.

Stan

on 8/12/03 10:42 AM, Paul Stenquist at [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

> Last weekend I shot a young lady, whom I'll call the "Trailer Park
> Princess" at -- you guessed it -- a trailer park. Some of the shots are
> with the LX at dusk. Others were shot early evening with the 6x7,
> handheld at 1/30 with fill flash from a reflector. The are cliched, but
> cliche was my intent. Some people I've shown them to find them
> interesting. Others think they're horrible. Take a look if you're
> interested.
> http://www.photo.net/photodb/folder.tcl?folder_id=326700
> Paul
> 
> 

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