Boris Liberman <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

>MR> I didn't get my portrait shot in to the PUG by deadline so I'll present
>MR> it as a PAW image.
>MR> http://www.robertstech.com/temp/7d302729.jpg
>MR> The subject is Dr Kwasi, a local percussionist, photographed in Highland
>MR> Park here in Pittsburgh last summer. I loved the light at the time.
>MR> I cropped a bit off the left-hand edge to get it to a 4:5 ratio which
>MR> seem to work well for this shot.
>
>Mark, I find one thing a little questionable about this one. The focus
>is such that it is on the drum on the left and on the guy on the
>right. Two drums in the middle which are out of focus kind of divide
>the image in two. So for a little time I was wondering between the
>guy's pose and expression and between that drum which is in focus...
>
>It was a little distracting.

Funny, that doesn't bother me at all. I kind of like it, in fact.
What bothers me is the small drum on the bottom edge of the frame that
you can just see part of. On the other hand, I like the way the two out
of focus drums kind of lead your eyes up to the face of Dr. Kwasi.

>I wish I could hear him playing...

He's *really* good. He's been playing for a very long time, though. Take
a look at the photo again and try to tell yourself this man is 70 years
old. Really, he is.


-- 
Mark Roberts
Photography and writing
www.robertstech.com

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