I think you'll see a very strong emotional connection when
some others from the series get posted.  Just another few
days, a week at the most, before the new computer is sitting
on the desk <YIPPEE!)

thanks for the comments ... they're always welcome.

shel

frank theriault wrote:
> 
> I like it, a lot.
> 
> I know this is something we've talked about off-list recently, but I really
> like the way the background "comes together" - the buildings on the left,
> the overhang on the right, the lamposts at the back of the square, the
> pedestrians off in the distance - it all works in a very pleasing way.
> Doesn't detract from or distract one away from the subjects, but enhances
> them, almost pushes the viewer back to the middle, if you know what I mean.
> 
> That wall in the foreground, the one she's sitting on is wonderful;  once
> again, drawing the viewer right to the subject.  Great angle.
> 
> I can see how you must work on all of this (where I don't - but this isn't
> about me).  I'm sure this all didn't "just happen".
> 
> I just went and looked again, and noticed the plant on the right.  This is
> all such wonderful composition!
> 
> As for the subjects, well, I have to admit, to me, they aren't quite as
> strong as the rest of the photo.  I don't know why, but the fact that they
> seem to be looking off to something else, with one of them pointing in the
> direction that they're looking, for some reason I'm not thrilled with that.
> It doesn't make it a bad photo;  far from it, but I wish they were looking
> at each other, or maybe at the camera.  I keep wondering what they're
> looking at.  Or is that the point?
> 
> Still, a very strong photograph, but I seem to be longing for an emotional
> connection between the two of them that I'm not feeling.  Maybe it'll come.
> I do like it a lot, though.
> 
> I must now leave the house with my camera, and take piccies on the way down
> to the lab to get a PAW that I hope to post tonight...
>

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