Hi ...

Well, the bokeh is quite harsh, the reason notwithstanding, and it fights
the great lines and shape of the flamingo.  The colors are way too
saturated for my taste.  Legs are nice to see in their entirety.  There's a
pink wing tip intruding into the frame on the viewer's right.  Big
distraction.  Nothing that can't be fixed.  Overall, it's not a bad start.

Shel Belinkoff


> [Original Message]
> From: Christian Skofteland <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>

> This was shot at the National Zoo yesterday.  It is the full frame.  Good?
> Bad?  indifferent?  What could be improved?
>
>
http://home.mindspring.com/~c_skofteland/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictu
res/flamingo_imgp2041.jpg
>
> As always, thank you.
>
> Christian Skofteland
> [EMAIL PROTECTED]
>


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