Hi Mark ... I like what you're trying to do with this one, however, a
tighter crop might work better.  Get rid of the people in the background,
they distract from the relationship between the boy and his mother. 
Something like this, perhaps:

http://home.earthlink.net/~sbelinkoff/mark.jpg

The conversion to B&W was accidental, but when I saw it, I liked it.  It
seems to make the wrist band stand out a bit more.

You can still see the relationship very clearly, and there's a nice
diagonal created by the boy holding hid mother's hand and running up to the
upper right of the photo.  Whaddaya think?

Shel Belinkoff


> [Original Message]
> From: Mark Dalal <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> To: Pentax Discuss <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> Date: 5/20/2004 4:00:27 PM
> Subject: PAW - Mi Amor
>
> Hey Folks,
>
> Here's one for the peanut gallery (comments appreciated):
>
> http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=2376602&size=lg
>
> Mark


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