on 18.06.04 15:09, Shel Belinkoff at [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > The photo is very tightly framed and cropped. How exactly you would crop > it? Why do you want to see more of the man? What would more of his body > add to the photograph? If you crop out some of the space above him, you > will lose some or all of the woman. How do you reconcile that? Maybe you > didn't see her. If you didn't, and you do now, how does that change your > feeling about the photograph? Is the woman a dream? A thought? An > apparition? Does she add to or detract from the photograph? Would the > photo work without the man, and just the woman? Is the man really the main > subject? Shel, the problem is, that I haven't seen any woman on this photo, just a cigarette smoke on the left, dark wall :-) And it was until Mike wrote to me that this shape should be actually woman. And indeed, after a long looking I have finally noticed her :-) Indeed, she's there, holding probably bowl in her hands :-) So I cancel all that I said about framing. Now it is OK, very OK, just right - no more no less :-)
-- Best Regards Sylwek
