Hi

GA> http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=2351011&size=lg

GA> An ordinary scan of a picture taken just when I was getting interested
GA> in photography and had bought a camera from rec.photo.35mm.equipment.
GA> Scanned from a 4x6" print at 200 dpi. Comments on composition, lighting
GA> welcome inspite of the poor scan etc.

Gaurav, this is very interesting shot. Knowing how it was scanned and
processed I have nothing to day about technical side of the coin.
However, I should say I find the fact that building is partially
covered with the gate a bit distractive. You see, it is unclear to me
whether you wanted to show the beautiful building in the as beautiful
a frame or you wanted to say that this building does not belong here,
and you crossed it with the silhouette of the gate.

I should say that silhouette of the monkey on the top adds to the
confusion.

You know what - it sill works for me. It has many meanings and
therefore it makes one stop and stare at it wandering between the
meanings. I'd say it is rather successful.

Hope I make at least some sense to you.

Thanks.


Boris
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