Protea and Bees by Dan Matyola - A real tough exposure situation. 
Were you doing it in B&W, the old "expose for the shadows and lengthen
developing time" (which I recently learned from Shel, but haven't used
yet) might have helped.  As is, the centre of the bloom, and more
importantly the bee, are a bit underexposed, while the top petals and
leaves are pretty bright - maybe even blown out a bit in the case of
those top petals.  Too bad, because it's a wonderful photo otherwise. 
Nice composition and cropping, lovely subject, and of course those
bees make it.  Other thing that might have helped would be fill-flash,
but it's too late for that now, isn't it?  I don't want to make too
big a deal about the exposure, as it was a very difficult one, and you
did well in the way it was dealt with.  Plus, the rest of the photo
makes up for it, IMHO.  Well done.  Interesting photo.

flower by Pentaxsky - Beautiful.  Simple concept, well executed, you
caught a beautiful pattern in the tight petals of the flower.  I like
the way the "hole" in the centre is dead centre in the frame as well. 
Nice use of light and shadows.  And of course, the colour is vividly
beautiful (and properly topical <g>).  I like it!

Rosa 'Fragrant Cloud' by Kostas Kavoussanakis - Quite entrancing. 
There's a lot to like here, from the understated red of the petals
(love the grey/black in there, too), to the almost perfect shape of
the bloom, to the lovely OOF leaves in the background.  It all might
have been a bit brighter, but that may be my monitor.  The one detail
that I just love, and it almost "makes the photo" for me, is the
single droplet of moisture on the bottom petal.  Almost as if the rose
is crying.  Beautiful.

Triad in Color by Harald Rust - Edward Weston eat your heart out
<vbg>.  Okay, it looks nothing like a Weston, but every time I see a
pepper...  I like this one.  Nice colours, I like the "natural" look
of the ice as a backdrop (if fruit markets are natural, I guess...). 
Nice placement/framing of the fruits (or are they vegetables?) - that
pattern seems to work very nicely.  Again, the droplets of moisture
are a nice touch.  That would make one of a nice series, nicely framed
and on the wall of a restaurant.  Very nice!

Strawberries by E.R.N. Reed - Looks scrumptious!  Vivid reds, I like
the sheen on them.  Nice framing, I like the way you got most but not
quite all of the leaves of the largest berry in the frame - cutting
off the very edges of those leaves sort of adds to the "jumbled" look
of the subjects.  Now, if we just had a bit of whipped cream (real
fresh whipped stuff, not that crap in spray cans or plastic tubs)... 
<vbg>

Bubbles by Thomas Moraitis - I like the concentration on his face -
real innocent looking, as if his bubbles were the most important thing
in the world (which I suppose they were, to him at that particular
moment).  Nice and sharp, I like the shape/blur of the bubbles, 
Framing/cropping is very nice, with the bubble just about to go
out-of-frame.  Nice green bokeh;  too bad about that little hot-spot
over the boy's head.  Just a minor quibble, though, for an overall
very strong photo.

More later.

Cheers,
frank


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"Sharpness is a bourgeois concept."  -Henri Cartier-Bresson

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