Frank,

Actually I am glad that you took the time and effort to look at my entry.
Construtive criticism is always welcome. This was a vacation snapshot.
Late afternoon sun, cluttered interior of a shop in an old building, no
flash other
than the puny built-in of a 5N and not enough reach from my 28-70. I got my
excuses covered. But I got all the red I could!

Thanks,
Albert

>>Vejigante by Albert Fekson - An interesting subject, but
>>unfortunately, there are a few things in the frame that distract from
>>it somewhat.  The framed picture near the bottom, and the air vent at
>>the top really don't do much for the photo.  The harsh shadows don't
>>help much either, IMHO.  I know that you likely couldn't move the
>>mythical beast, but maybe some tighter framing might have helped, or a
>>different angle or something.  Not that it's a bad photo, but it has
>>the look of a travel snapshot - which I guess it is.  There's
>>potential to make it a photograph that goes beyond "what we saw during
>>our trip to Puerto Rico".  I hope I don't sound too harsh, as my
>>critique is (1) my honest feelings, and (2) an attempt to be helpful.
>>Also, if you spend much time on PDML, you know not to listen to
>>anything I say, anyway.  <vbg>.

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