On Sat, 29 Jan 2005 11:59:32 +1100, Leon Altoff <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> On Thu, 27 Jan 2005 18:31:35 -0500, frank theriault wrote:
> 
> >My sister, her husband and I have a little site.  I don't know if any
> >of you recall what used to be there, but it's recently been revamped
> >using new software (Dreamweaver, I believe) that my sister got and
> >learned to use:
> >
> >http://urbancaravan.com/
> >
> >Any comments or suggestions would be appreciated.  Thanks.
> 
> I have a pet hate for text done as pictures.  It never looks right.
> It's much easier to simply define the font, particularly if you want to
> make changes.
> 
> All the pages are "Untitled"  This is what is saved when you save a
> favorite so if you want people to come back easily it's best to give it
> a good title.
> 
> There is also a lack of navigation on the picture pages.  You can only
> go to the gallery, no next/previous picture, home or anything else.
> 
> There are 2 index pages.  One with an upper case "I" one with lower
> case.  Both are slightly different.  I prefer the upper case I page,
> but the mouseover on the side menu has the writing the same colour as
> the background.
> 
> I feel there is too much blank space at the bottom of the pages.
> 
> Someone talked about more "POW" or "WOW Factor".  The idea of the page
> is to show off images and have people hopefully buy them.  So you need
> a site that is easy to navigate, is pleasant to look at and shows the
> images off at their best.  If you add music, someone will hate it and
> leave.  If you have fancy mouse pointers they will annoy people.  If
> you put too much pizazz people will look at the web design and ignore
> the pictures.
> 
> I think it needs a bit of polishing, but is a good start (particularly
> the uppercase I design).
> 
> Just my thoughts.
> 
>  Leon
> 
> http://www.bluering.org.au
> http://www.bluering.org.au/leon
> 

Thanks to David, Leon and Marnie for your incisive comments and
thoughts.  I'll be sending them along to ma petite soeur, and we'll
discuss changes/modifications based on what you've all said.

These are exactly the type of comments I was hoping for.

thanks again,
frank


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