On Sun, 20 Mar 2005 06:17:30 -0800, Shel Belinkoff <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hi Paul, > > You have a lovely daughter, although she looks a little uncomfortable in > this situation. Agreed, and agreed. You've got yourself a lovely model. > > As a portrait, however, this is far from your best work. Ingred's eyes > look a little bloodshot, her bra strap is showing, and there seems to be > some artifacting on her nose. The two highlights in each eye are something > of a distraction as well. One highlight might be better, yes? More > traditional in a formal portrait, in any case? My first thought is that a slightly higher camera angle may be a bit more flattering. Other than that, I like it. I didn't really notice the double highlights until Shel pointed them out. They don't bother me. > > Shel > > > [Original Message] > > From: Paul Stenquist > > > http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3178492 > >
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