Thanks for looking, but I disagree in regard to the crop. Without the 
environment, it's merely a reproduction of someone else's art. The ornament and 
its highlight add dimension. I shot it without the wall and ornament as well, 
and the mural just lays there. 
Paul 


> I agree with Shel on the crop.  The ornament on the wall is
> distracting.  Probably because of the way the light is reflecting off
> it.  Cropping out the brick wall and the ornament sounds good to me. 
> Otherwise, I really like it.
> 
> 
> On Sat, 26 Mar 2005 06:50:40 -0500, Paul Stenquist
> <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > Good idea, Shel. I think I will do a series. I'm frequently in the
> > neighborhood and often park within a dozen yards or so of the mural. I
> > didn't see it before because it's in a walkway to a street that I
> > seldom visit. I had wondered how it might look in the morning, although
> > I think there's seldom any light in this narrow passage, save what
> > clipped the stone ornament at noon. I know I cold shoot it straight on
> > without the bricks and stone ornament, but then it would be just a
> > representation of the mural rather than a photo of the environment in
> > which it exists. In truth, I might try something wider. Thanks for the
> > suggestion.
> > Paul
> > On Mar 25, 2005, at 11:27 PM, Shel Belinkoff wrote:
> > 
> > > Hi Paul,
> > >
> > > I love murals, and glad to see you got this one.  I like it, but
> > > wonder if
> > > it might be a stronger pic with the brick wall cropped off, or maybe an
> > > altogether tighter crop.  It it were me, I'd photograph it in different
> > > light at different times, make something of a small project of it.
> > > Could
> > > be fun and you'd be preserving some local art as well.
> > >
> > > Shel
> > >
> > >
> > >> [Original Message]
> > >> From: Paul Stenquist
> > >
> > >> http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3225777&size=lg
> > >
> > >
> > 
> > 
> 
> 
> -- 
> Scott Loveless
> http://www.twosixteen.com
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