Thanks Shel for your input. Here is a closer crop (@ 200%) in its original state:

http://www.g0nz.com/images/sleepy3.jpg

I played around with it alot trying to get the crop + the detail that I wanted to convey. But alas, what I really needed was a longer and brighter lens. A 135/2.5 would have been nice in this case. The "grain" from the high iso really obscures what would have been a much better pic.

rg


Shel Belinkoff wrote:
I don't know how I feel about this one.  At one viewing I like it, another
time I don't.  One thing I'm almost sure of, the noise and grain and lack
of detail really takes away from the impact it could have.  Not being able
to clearly see what may arguably be the most important aspect of the photo,
that small piece which tells the story, is a real detriment.

I like the position of the fellow, his relationship to the building and the
steps, and the off kilter angle of the steps, and the photo could be quite
strong were it not for the noise and the grain.

Also, since this was taken at dusk, and the light was low, the photo may
look better a little darker.  I did a quick fiddle with it, and seeing the
mans complexion and jacket a little darker made the photo feel more alive
and interesting.

It's a good photo, perhaps more in its potential than its actualization. Right now I'm liking it more than when i started this message.

Shel



[Original Message]
From: Gonz <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: <[email protected]>
Date: 4/8/2005 7:24:17 AM
Subject: PESO: I'm watching you

http://www.g0nz.com/images/sleepymanmx.jpg

This fellow likes to watch people go by near a church in a small village in Mexico. He was keeping his eye on me, I had been snapping pics all around him when I thought that maybe he wasnt looking and I snapped this. But when I looked closer, I realized that he was still looking at me with his eyes half closed. It was almost dusk, so I had to use iso 3200 on the *istD, hence the graininess of the pic.

Comments welcome.

rg






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