On Apr 17, 2005, at 10:51 AM, [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

  http://www.caughtinmotion.com/paecwinter/index.htm

My first Breezebrowser html webpage attempt.
I like what it does and has potential to do,just gotta fiqure it out.

The pages look fine.

If I might make a suggestion or two on the photos ...

- They're too static. Using flash to capture the motion has frozen them into position so "caughtinmotion" is reall more frozen-in-motion. You need better lighting and a little more movement in the image to give a sense of the horse and rider's power as they perform their stile jump.

- I realize that you've got a lot of horses and a lot of different owners who might want a similar photo of their horse so the set as a whole has to be somewhat repetitious as a series of "record shots", but I think you should try varying the point of view for some exposures and cropping to provide a little more dynamism. A tight crop to the horse's forequarter and the rider's eyes would provide more drama.

Godfrey



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