Hi Gonz ... I can't see the shot working without the guy on the left, so we'll just have to agree to disagree on that point.
My first reaction to your comment about the woman's jacket was to dismiss it, but then I went back and took a good, hard look at it, and darned if I don't agree with you There are some brighter areas that really need to be toned down. I did that, and I have to say that the jacket looks much improved. I can't believe I missed it earlier. Also discovered were two spots that were overlooked and which needed a touch of the healing brush, so it was good to revisit the work print in any case. Thanks so much ... I really appreciate your critical eye. I'm sending you a copy of this in case it doesn't make the list. Shel > [Original Message] > From: Gonz > Nice shot. I would like the composition more if only the 4 passengers > on the right were in. The guy on the left only detracts from what > otherwise would be a great composition. Technically, I like the > tonality except for the rightmost woman's jacket, which seems to have > gotten washed out or something. The tonality makes it look fake, > plasticky, I wonder what is doing that, the angle of the light?
