Hey, Shel.  Here's another very different photo from the same roll for
comparison.  K1000, M28/3.5.  Late afternoon, sunny.
http://twosixteen.com/gallery/index.php?id=25

On 5/2/05, Shel Belinkoff <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Hi Scott ...
> 
> Well, you asked, so here goes:
> 
> First, it's great to see someone else moving into the darkroom and
> exploring the possibilities of B&W photography.  Good for you.
> 
> The lack of detail in your wife's hair, the blouse, and the shadow under
> her wrist, probably the result of an under exposed negative, really detract
> fron any potential this photo may have.  Of course, there may have also
> been a error in development time or the way you set the scanner.  IAC, the
> result is quite poor.
> 
> There was probably no need for a yellow filter, although with proper
> exposure and development it may have added something to the skin tones
> depending on your wife's coloration and the color temp of the light.
> 
> The image doesn't look particularly sharp, but that's nit, in and of
> itself, a negative, especially if you wanted that extra bit of softness,
> which can be nice in some portraits and pics of this sort. .  My concern is
> why it looks the way it does, and if it's something you did intentionally?
> It's been mentioned many times, in many venues,  that scanning a 35mm neg
> on a flatbed scanner will generally produce poor results, and, according to
> some reviews I've read when looking for a flatbed scanner,  the Canon model
> you're using has had problems producing well focused scans.
> 
> The obvious grain on the wall seems way too much for contemporary TX,
> especially on so small a reproduction.  Perhaps you're a little out of
> practice with your developing technique - too much or too vigorous
> agitation, perhaps, or maybe not paying enough attention to the temp of the
> developer, stop, fix, and rinse.
> 
> The contrast of the image seems strong, regardless of the deep black in the
> hair and shadows.  This could be a result of over development, too high a
> development temp (maybe the thermometer is off?) which is, essentially, the
> same thing, or to frequent and strong an agitation cycle.
> 
> Perhaps you can take a moment and let us know the time/temp/agitation cycle
> that you used.
> 
> Shel
> 
> > [Original Message]
> > From: Scott Loveless
> 
> > Here's the new link:
> > http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3326184  I deleted the
> > original before I pulled my head out of my..........
> 
> > I haven't processed film myself in over 12 years, so I'm really
> > starting with no experience.  The following photograph is from the
> > first roll I've developed.  It's a portrait of my wife taken a few
> > days ago.  K-1000, Super-Takumar 135/3.5 M42 mount, medium yellow
> > filter, Tri-X 400, D-76 1:1, scanned, unsharp mask, and removal of
> > most of the dust.  That's it.  Feel free to criticize, critique, or
> > laugh (at the photo, please, not my wife).
> 
> 


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Scott Loveless
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