Hi!
Too contrived for me. Don't like the phone dude looking this way. It's plain what you're up to, but it's too tight for me, too claustrophobic. Boris, do yourself a big favour and buy this book:
<http://tinyurl.com/9j2f3>
Study the contents and if you have even half the heart I think you have, it will inspire you beyond words my friend.
Cotty, pardon my ignorance, but the book is in English, isn't it?
Boris

