Hi John ... I have another shot without the person. There's quite a lot to like in the shot, but a few elements didn't come together well. It may be worth another visit ... Thanks so much for your input.
Shel > [Original Message] > From: John Forbes > I think this is a tremendous shot. The patterns are so strong, and so > effective, that I think they render the human figure superfluous. If you > can go back, when the light is right, it would be nice to try the shot > with nobody there. For me, it would work, and work better. > > John > > On Wed, 11 May 2005 14:44:38 +0100, Jack Davis <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > Shel, > > I look forward to the "more blurry fellow". > > May convey a state of confusion as though finding > > himself in a 'too' advanced geometry class. In which > > case, it would only make sense if so titled. > > > > Jack > > > > --- Shel Belinkoff <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > >> I wonder if I should make the fellow even more > >> blurry. I was thinking of > >> doing just that. What say ye? (Well, I'm gonna try > >> it anyway) > >> > >> Shel > >> > >> > >> > [Original Message] > >> > From: Cesar > >> > >> > >It works for a bit - all the converging lines and > >> white leading > >> > >directly to a FACELESS person. The center of it > >> all just falls apart > >> > >for me. Almost like a nice crescendo and > >> then...nothing. > >> > > > >> > > > >> > Thanks Bruce, I could not have put it better > >> myself. > >> > > >> > As an engineer, English is not my fort�, > >> > > >> > C�sar > >> > Panama City, Florida > >> > >> > >> > > > > > > > > Yahoo! Mail > > Stay connected, organized, and protected. Take the tour: > > http://tour.mail.yahoo.com/mailtour.html > > > > > > > > > > > > -- > > No virus found in this incoming message. > > Checked by AVG Anti-Virus. > > Version: 7.0.308 / Virus Database: 266.11.8 - Release Date: 10/05/2005 > > > > > > -- > Using Opera's revolutionary e-mail client: http://www.opera.com/m2/ > > > -- > No virus found in this outgoing message. > Checked by AVG Anti-Virus. > Version: 7.0.308 / Virus Database: 266.11.8 - Release Date: 10/05/2005
