>Things I would like to see: > Just a little more DOF - not lots, but I would like to see just a > bit of the hand and a bit more of the top of head being in >focus - use > your DOF preview to gauge how much > > Eyes - a baby's eyes are so deep and full of communication - I would > really like to see more than this - probably a slightly different > angle would do it. > >Keep at it, they grow so quickly and change all the time. > Indeed they do.
Thanks for suggestions. I do agree about the eyes. If I was to choose one of three things suggested by you and Shel, it would be "try a different angle". I have one frame where she lifted her head a bit more, but has weaker overall composition. I might reconsider again. I'm not so sure about DOF - I have several frames stopped down one and then one and half stop (this one was taken at f/2) but they just don't feel so ... well, intimate. Cheers, Leon

