The more I look at the photo, the more lopsided I feel. There seems to be a lack of balance (not symmetry, but balance) I like the composition overall, etc, but I get the impression that the left-hand side has too much to say, while the right says nothing. It's there for ??? In contrast to others, who said that the posters on the wall distract, I find myself wishing for a larger poster on the right-hand side of the frame. Even more surreal might have been a person walking away, off the right-hand side... I don't know, I'm just tossing out my thoughts here. My point is that the photo seems too heavy on the left, and light on the right. Not, mind you, that I think it's a bad photo, but this might be what some people are wishing for?
On 5/18/05, Jack Davis <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Shel, > The two "posters" sort interrupt the mood. Otherwise, > I find the geometric flow, countered by the lines of > the bike, interesting. > Another example of your affinity for the well placed > line. > > Jack > --- Shel Belinkoff <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > http://home.earthlink.net/~scbelinkoff/bikewaiting.html > > > > I was about to round file this one, but decided to > > post it here to see what > > the experts thought of it. It's just a rough "work > > print." Comments and > > crits welcome. > > > > > > Shel > > > > > > > > __________________________________________________ > Do You Yahoo!? > Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around > http://mail.yahoo.com > > > -- -- -Jon Glass Krakow, Poland <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
