Thanks for your comments, Tom.
After a couple of comments it seems clear that the
picture worked for the first intention (to show the
whole building), and that the cropping only went
halfway to the work taht should have been done with a
tele.
About the tripod... I don't know if I would go to that
part of the city with it. Not for sure during the
night.
Thanks again and thanks to Chris for coordinating us.
It is very instructive to have your photo commented.
Jaume
--- aimcompute <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> " Balconies in the Afternoon " by Jaume Lahuerta,
> Spain
>
> There is quite a bit of interest in this shot and
> the idea is great.
>
> Several things I might change. The photo seems a
> little fuzzy, likely
> because of the cropping/enlarging. Some sharpening
> in the image
> manipulation tool may improve it. I'd like to see
> the same kind of shot
> taken a little closer to the building with maybe 1/3
> to 1/2 the number of
> balconies. Possibly even just several balconies,
> some occupied/some not.
> Using a tall tripod and step stool you may be able
> to get the lens more
> perpindicular to the building... reducing the
> leaning back feeling. I might
> suggest taking the shot on an overcast day. The
> range between light and
> dark would be less. I realize the shadows do lend
> interest, but in this
> case I wish I could see more in the shadow area. A
> little more uniform
> lighting could help.
>
> I think going back again and again, would provide
> additional time for
> alternate compositions to become apparent.
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