I like the shallow DOF just as it is. It's good. The tonality is a bit darker for me, but it might just work in a print - it's hard to guess over web pictures. I wouldn't bother with a title - I always thought up titles for my photos, just to later find out how stupid they were (the titles <g>). Good photo speaks for itself without any poetic title. Even worse, very poetic titles often hide boring photos (including mine <g>). If you want a title, I think a simple descriptive one is best. "Boat" ;-)
Overall, quite a nice photograph. I like the composition, with the wooden planks below left, contrasting with the out of focus brighter sea top right. It might be worth playing a bit with the tonality, though. Frantisek
