FWIW, I liked the original crop and perspective quite a bit more. This one feels too constricted and, imo, reduces the free and easy feel found in the original.
Shel > [Original Message] > From: Paul Stenquist > For anyone who's still mildly interested in this overextended thread, I > made some changes based on my first work print. Here's where I ended up > with this one: > http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=3402700&size=lg

