On 5/29/05, Bob Sullivan <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Frank, > > Something is wrong with your vision. The tulip is IN focus! > I can even see little water drops on it. > Makes me want to reach out and touch it. > > The remaining tulips are hansomely out of focus. Very nice. > > My only suggestions... > I'd like to get that back tulip not to overlap the front, in focus, one.
I agree completely. It's one of the things I thought that I'll need to look out for next time. > I want more stem on the front tulip, for some reason. Again, I agree. I would have also liked a bit more "air" around the in-focus one, and to that end, I'd have liked it to be away from the left edge of the frame a bit. > > Nice work for your first try! It's kind of fun, I have to admit. I shot two rolls, of which maybe 10 shots were macros, and since I got both rolls developed at the same time, this is really my first feedback (there's an advantage of digital, to be sure - feedback of some sort, as you go along...). Thanks for your comments, Bob. Much appreciated. cheers, frank -- "Sharpness is a bourgeois concept." -Henri Cartier-Bresson
