>Hello together, > >this is a picture I like quite much - though it's maybe a bit >colourful... It's a new shopping temple in the south of >Germany an the use of the DA16-45 produced a nice effect... >Hope you like it...
It's quite a bit more than just "a bit" colorful. And a good thing it is, too. Great colors, especially this yellowish light back in the middle. It even manages to add some warmth into what would otherwise look like a cold, utilitarian structure. It is an interesting thing you used the term "temple" - indeed I often saw these malls as temples of modern consumer society. And people shopping there as modern sort of pilgrims, seeking salvation in buying more and more things they don't really need. There isn't much room to improve this photograph. Other people already suggested some. Personally, I would try to get it even more perfectly symmetrical. I don't see this photograph suitable for "Chinese Garden" approach. Cheers, Leon

