On 6/5/05, Shel Belinkoff <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > http://home.earthlink.net/~scbelinkoff/05.html > > Work in Progress - not quite finished - Comments? Crits? > > Shel
Love it! The tire and doorway (is that what it is, on the right of the frame?) really work well in the composition. I know it's a work in progress, but I find that her arms and hands are a smidge blown out. I find it hard to see the cigarette in her hand, which I'd think to be an important part of the image. I also wish I could see the smoke she's blowing a bit better. Maybe these can be fixed with further fiddling? Other than those things, I think it's a great shot. You caught her in a rough spot, but rather tenderly, I think. cheers, frank -- "Sharpness is a bourgeois concept." -Henri Cartier-Bresson
