Frank,

>> P. J. Alling  wrote:
>> I want to like this one

I find myself thinking the same thing. I think what we both are
essentially saying is that we can see *why* you took the photo...
*BUT*... <g>

I'd agree that the converging horizontal lines detract. But more than
that, I hate that the etching in the bus stop glass covers the second
kid's face. That really stinks. I also would have cropped it just under
the line in the street, making the primary subject of interest less
central in the frame. As it stands, you've basically split the photo in
half (horizontally), which makes it less effective, IMHO (I'll send you a
recrop of what I mean).

HTH, Frank.

     - Jerome

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