It's nice because the guy passing by before you (with the camera just
loose in your hand?) seems to attract the attention of the third sitting
boy, while the two others are listening to the fourth boy. The
'attention' in the picture is balanced between left and right border.
The amount of pavement is needed not to distort perspective, because the
boys are sitting down. The only improvement could have been to hold the
camera vertically, so the perspective would have been perfect.
This is the first critique I enter on the PAW's in the list, so allow me
to see this as a breakthrough to start posting PAW's (rather: PESO's) soon.
Groeten,
Vic
Cotty wrote:
On 15/8/05, Godfrey DiGiorgi, discombobulated, unleashed:
while in London:
http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW5/31.htm
Comments and critique always appreciated.
I smell a hip-shot!
Cheers,
Cotty
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