Boris, I really like this one. I don't agree that the tonality is wrong, as
you have, at least on my monitor, both extreme highlights and deep black
shadows. Others have talked about cropping it, but I think it would be hard
to do without either placing the lectern too close to the frame or losing
the subtle lighting in the top right corner. Compositionally, the placing
of the lectern and the angles of the chairs is perfect: I might want a
visual conclusion to that eye-line, as I then find nothing at the end of it
except the pillars and windows (the crucifix on the altar is just a little
off-line).
Overall, I'd be very happy to have taken this one!
John Coyle
Brisbane, Australia
----- Original Message -----
From: "Boris Liberman" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: <[email protected]>
Sent: Saturday, September 10, 2005 5:24 AM
Subject: PESO - In The Tower
Hi!
http://www.photoforum.ru/rate/photo.php?photo_id=215716
Please try to click on the image so that it will open on total black
background - the way I intended it to be watched.
I think I need a lens wider than 18 mm...
As usual - be brutal and honest.
Boris
