Hello David, The framing of the photo is nice - the bird in the upper left corner helps me to imagine it flying along and there is room there to see it's flight path. Where it is problematic is that the waves/ripples on the water are fighting the bird for my attention. They are too focused and quite a strong element. A smaller issue is that we can see the bird is flying somewhere, but even though we can see the flight path, it is leading to nowhere.
-- Best regards, Bruce Wednesday, October 12, 2005, 5:31:54 AM, you wrote: DS> G'day All, DS> I was looking through my archives tonight & came across this shot I DS> took some time ago: DS> http://tinyurl.com/8oq8s DS> I've come back to it a few times since I took it & I'm a bit DS> undecided. There are elements about it I like but to me something just DS> seems a "off", and I can't quite put my finger on what "it" may be. DS> Could be that it's just a crap photo, I dunno, but I would appreciate DS> any thoughts or comments you may have. DS> Dave
