On Nov 1, 2005, at 12:03 AM, Marco Alpert wrote:

http://www.alpert.com/marco/pdml/peso29.html

As always, nice work on the rendering and tonalities. You have a great feel for that.

This composition is a little less focused than previous photos you've offered. I'm not sure it has enough strength by itself as a standalone expression. There are some interesting relationships in it but it doesn't pull my eye distinctly one to the next ... seems a little too crowded, or something.

Godfrey

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