Hi!
I like the shot but your tonal rendering is off the mark. I made an adjustment as example. It might not be what you want to see in this photo, but consider it as an example of how to get started.http://homepage.mac.com/godders/DB/
Godfrey, you seem to be more attracted to high key images than to low key... Neither of the two in question is not high or low key per se, but I noticed in your work general tendency to brighter tones... I find this remarkable!
Boris
