On 11/20/05, Godfrey DiGiorgi <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Whew, feels like forever since I've put a PAW photo up. Figured I'd > get these two on the site before I leave for NY tomorrow ... two at > once. > > http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW5/44.htm > http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW5/45.htm > > Comments, critique, flames all appreciated.
The first one's rather whimsical, but really doesn't do much for me. The face 1/2 in the shadow bothers me some, and the awning and buildings in the background just don't seem to work with the foreground. There just isn't any integration between foreground and background. The second one, however, is a real winner! Strong composition; it all just comes together and works very well for me. -- "Sharpness is a bourgeois concept." -Henri Cartier-Bresson
