I like it! I have to say I usually like industrial pics, and nightshots. This one is both, I _have_ to like it! lol
I can't argue on metering, since my monitor is far-far away from a well calibrated one (I'm at work, now), but it seems ok to me, and I can barely see any distorsion (and just because you named it) maybe posing the landline a little more to the bottom would have improved it, IMO, but then prospective distorsion is what you'd get, probably, expecially with the horrible distorted lens you have (lol) cheers, Danilo.
